Writing About Writing (p. 301-304)
“Shitty Fist Drafts”
by Anne Lamott
Synthesis:
This article is like all the others
in the sense that the authors are writing about different aspects of writing to
an audience of college readers. Lamott’s work is not similar to that of Greene,
Kleine, Berger, Mcloud, or Elbow. She’s not really talking about general
constructs, visual constructs, or even voice. Lamott is, however, talking about
the inspired writer being a myth just as Allen did. Lamott told about how she has
to write several drafts before her work is finished. Lamott’s article is also
related to the Berkenkotter/Murray reading because all of them detail the
writing process of a published writer. This article is also related to the
Kantz article in a distant way. Kantz talks about using existing texts to
create an original one, and in a way- Lamott encourages using all existing
drafts (even the sketchy first draft) to create a polished original piece of
work.
My Personal Thoughts:
This was almost my favorite article
this far (excluding the Stephen King article that you will read about shortly).
It was straight to the point, it was not wordy or hard to understand, and it
truly related to the college reader. In high school I probably just would have
giggled at the title, but as I read this article I just found myself connecting
to Lamott and what she had to say. It was like a fellow student or a really
cool teacher was explaining to me that writing isn’t flawless for anyone. It’s nice to know that everyone
has shitty first drafts, not just me.
Writing About Writing (p. 305-307)
“What Writing Is” by
Stephen King
Synthesis:
I would say that Stephen King’s
article was related to Greene’s article because King made his argument
throughout the whole piece. Telepathy was the topic, magic of a sort, and King
practiced what he was preached just like Greene did. In a way, King was also
similar to Berger and McCloud- not by talking about the actual history and
aspects of visual constructs, but by creating such imagery through his text. It
was also obvious that King has a strong voice, one strong enough to create an
image in the reader’s head and one that pierces prominently through his words.
Thus, King is related to Elbow in a way as well. I’m not sensing too much connection
with the articles by Kleine, Kantz, Berkenkotter/Murray, Allen, or Lamott- but
that does not mean that the connection is not there for other readers.
My Personal Thoughts:
LOVED IT! This was by far, 100%, my
favorite article from this class. Something about King just reaches me. Not
only do I like the actual author, but also the article itself was revealing.
When he started off with, “Telepathy, of course,” I thought it was a joke. But
as I was reading, I realized that King had tricked me- and he had been using
his rhetorical magic all along. I like imagery in writing a great deal, and to
come across an essay like this in a class like this just brightened my
experience. King’s voice is just the right one for a college reader like me.
Writing About Writing (p. 319-321)
“Becoming a Writer”
by Junot Diaz
Synthesis:
Diaz’s article was mostly related
to the articles by Allen and Lamott. Allen’s article talked about the inspired
writer myth, and what a real writer is. Diaz told his story about essentially
having 5-7 years worth of writer’s block- and was already published. So, the
relationship between these two articles is clear. Lamott talked about having a
lousy first draft and that writing can take time. Diaz’s first attempt was
obviously not clean cut. Thus, the two articles are also related. Diaz’s
article could be related to the Berkenkotter/Murray reading (and the Allen
reading for this matter) just in the sense that the each of them explains the
writing process of a published writer. As for the other writers we have
discussed, I don’t really sense an association with this article.
My Personal Thoughts:
After reading this article, I felt
kind of sad for Diaz. Five to seven years of block is a long time, and almost
having to give had to be a terrible experience for him. However, it was
reassuring to read that he stuck it out, and he felt that he grew as a writer.
I think Diaz could really reach out to students who want to give up with his story.
Great job pointing the King text to McCloud and Elbow.
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